Fun Story but Needs Editing Better
This is a very funny, fast paced read that had me laughing out loud. Amber Jaye has created Mickey [with an expensive shoe addiction – well we can all relate to that!] but she hasn’t the money to cover her debt to the loan shark. She goes to him and he says if she doesn’t deliver a parcel to his brother Eddie and spend a fun night with him for his birthday he will take it out on her brother and destroy her show collection! Eddie meets her at the door dressed in only a towel and she is astonished that he is so gorgeous and goes into the apartment with him and leaves quickly afterwards even though she is so attracted to him and the feeling is mutual. There does need to be some serious editing on the story and it will read so much better then as there were often words missing and sentences didn’t always make sense which is a pity as, otherwise it is a fun read to relax with. I will certainly be looking forward to her next book being published but hope the editing is much better. I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
DEFINITELY RECOMMENDED
